Hazelkit/ThunderClan/Kit/She-Cat

[Hazel~]

Name: Hazelkit (Hazelclaw)
Age: 5 moons
Honors: StarClan
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Relationships:

Yellowtail - Mother (Deceased)
Darkclaw - Father
Lightkit - Brother

Appearance:

Hazelkit has a short pelt, with different colors in her fur. Dark brown, light brown, and white can be found there. Hazelkit has a black nose, with a tiny pink mouth. Two paws of the she-cat are white, and the other two are black.

Hazelkit's circular eyes are grey-ish blue, with large, dark, rounded pupils. They give the apprentice a look of innocence, as if she's always wide-eyed with amazement.

The kitten will grow up to be a small cat, and even at her young age it is obvious. Hazelkit's tail, legs, and everything else are thin and small, with everything the same size proportionally. Her ears are also small and rounded, with tufts of fur peeking out from their insides.

Personality:

Hazelkit has a bright and strong personality. She is intelligent but not good with words. She looks up to Robinflight, and hopes to work with the medicine cat in the future. The she-cat remembers information very well, and she likes to think that she puts her talents to good use.

The kitten is very shy and quiet, and as such, Hazelkit is often very sensitive. The she-cat usually takes playful words seriously and is easily offended.

Hazelkit is very curious and snoopy. The apprentice is always looking around, trying to look for something new. Sometimes this bothers the other cats in ThunderClan. At times the other cats tell her to leave and this upsets Hazelkit because she does not deal well with rejection.

The she-cat has very poor fighting skills. When she thinks of fighting it makes her upset, and she thinks of those injured cats she has seen after they have battled. Hazelkit feels nothing but sadness for the pain-filled warriors.

The apprentice is very good at hunting, with her small size she can run very fast. Hazelkit catches prey easily for being a kit.

History:

Kithood: Hazelkit was the second-born of a litter of two, and her brother's name is Lightkit. The two kittens were born to their parents Yellowtail and Darkclaw in the middle of newleaf. Lightkit and Hazelkit were born too early and their mother died of blood loss. Darkclaw was out hunting when the two were born, and did not get back until all was said and done. The siblings fight a lot, and don't get along very well, but in all desperate times they will stick together. They were brought close by their mother's death.

Roleplay Example:

Hazelkit sat quietly near her mother as Lightkit batted around a small-ish ball of moss. "Come on, Hazelkit! Play with me!" The tom tackled his sister, and the she-cat was unprepared. Hazelkit tumbled into her mother, awakening the queen.

"No, Lightkit! Now look what you've done!" The she-kit stumbled to her paws, and looked her brother in the eye as their mother awoke with a groggy look in her eyes. "Lightkit, you really got here angry now!" Said the frightend kit. Hazelkit backed up.

"Lightkit! Hazelkit! Stop messing around so much! You are going to break something!" Said the hissing she-cat. From the mothers fierce words Hazelkit began to cry. Lightkit was on his four paws feeling upset.

The mother laid down and finally fell back asleep. Hazelkit and Lightkit backed away quietly, so their mother would not awaken again.

Pictures:

Hazelpaw!

Codeword:

-edited by Rain-

[.:Fawn:.]

^^ Alright, first off, very very good job on your first try.
I have nothing to correct, just a question to ask.

o.O how good are her hunting and fighting skills? How does she feel about fighting?
I was just curious about that. If you could add that on to the personality, that would be great. ^^ otherwise it's good to go.

[robinflight]

i kind of want robinflight to get her apprentice in the roleplay, like with the ceremony and all of that. i always wanted to do that. can you make her a kit at 6 moons, maybe?

[Lawly-Pop]

There's kind of a Leafkit in ThunderClan already. Lawl. Could you change her sister's name to something else?

Otherwise, this is a fantastic first bio. =3

[Hazel~]

Hazelkit is fixed and ready to be checked.

[.:Fawn:.]

=) With Robinflight's approval, I can accept this. Good job Hazel! ^^

[Breeze~]

Well, then, due to Robinflight's sudden absence and Fawn's aversion to double-posting, I will say -

Accepted as Kit of ThunderClan!

Congrats, sis!