Lilykit.ThunderClan.Kit.She-cat

[Lilyfrost <3]

Name: Lilykit
Age: 3 moons
Honors: She believes in StarClan
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Kit
Relationships:

Honeyflower- mother (Dead)
Lionfur- father (Dead)

Appearance:

Lilykit is a white and ginger she-kit. Her legs, chest, and muzzle are white. She fairly small for her age. Her eyes are bright blue and her nose is light pink. Her whiskers are silver and long. Her fur is short and sleek.

Personality:

Lilykit is a very shy kitten. She has a hard time meeting new cats most of the time, but sometimes, if she's in a really happy mood she has no problem meeting others. Lilykit loves to hear stories from the elders. She also loves to play.(what kit doesn't?) She is surprisingly weak for her age. She is jealous of kits with both parents or even just one. Lilykit wants to grow up to be the best warrior she can be.

History:

Lilykit was born into Thunderclan during Newleaf. Her mother was Honeyflower and her father was Lionfur. She was the only kit in the litter. Her mother sadly died giving birth to her. Lionfur was with her for 2 moons. He had died from greencough. Since then she has just been raised by the other queens at the nursery at the time.

Roleplay Example:

Lilykit started suckling the instant she was born. When her stomach was finally satisfied, the white and ginger she-kit curled up next to her mother's belly. She was very confused by what was happening. So many voices, so many scents. Soon her head started to hurt by all the commotion. Lilykit started to whine for them to stop. What was everyone fighting about? She wanted to know. The kit was so curious about this new world. Where was she? Who are all these cats? What's gonna happen? Lilykit continued to whine.

((It's from another RP site))

Pictures:

Codeword:

dream

Codeword:

dream

[.:Fawn:.]

Honors: She believes in Starclan

^^ Please capitalize the second part of Starclan, so it reads "StarClan." considering "Clan" is capitalized at all times. xD just like for Clanmate, or ThunderClan.

Please capitalize ThunderClan in the title.

Lilykit wants to grow up to be the bet warrior she can be.

I think you meant best.

Lilykit was born into Thunderclan during Newleaf.

Capitalize Clan please.

=) Over all, not bad. It's definitely shorter then I'd like, but you've met all the requirements, so I suppose I can't complain. Plus, you've made a kit, their bios aren't meant to be too long.

^^ the length will develop over time, I'm sure.

Once these are fixed, I can give it my approval.

[Lilyfrost <3]

Okay I edited it.

[.:Fawn:.]

All fixed? ^^ alrighty. I suppose the length will develop the more you Rp with us.

So without further ado,

Accepted as kit of ThunderClan!

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