Silverfur|RiverClan|She-Cat|Warrior

[Shade]

Name: Silverfur
Age: 25moons
Do you Honor?: StarClan
Mate: None
Kits: None
Gender: She-cat
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Breed: Korat Cat
Appearance:

Silverfur is a pale bright grey colored cat, which gives her the name Silverfur, especially when the sunlight hit her coat just right it takes on a metallic sort of sheen. Her eyes are large and a bright beautiful blue color. On her face there are darker grey markings running away from her eyes down her face, and from the top of her eyes to the base of her ears. Silverfur’s body is slim and graceful, and almost fragile looking. If cats could be dancers Silverfur would have the body for one. The slimness and sleekness of her body allows her to be one of the faster cats in her Clan. Her fur is short but thick, keeping the cold out and water as well for the most part. Along her shoulders there are a few faint scars of old wounds, but they are almost unnoticeable unless your face to face with her because the fur has grown back around them.

Personality:

Silverfur is very inquisitive and seems to have a lot of energy most of the time. Everytime she sees or discovers something new her first instinct is to go check it out rather than find out what it is first or report it. This can get her in trouble especially sometimes, if her leader wished to know of it first or she went somewhere or did something that she shouldn’t have been. Silverfur is a very friendly cat and is open to the idea that one day maybe all of the cats can live together peacefully instead of in separate Clans. While she respects the warrior code Silverfur doesn’t always agree to it when it comes to other Clans. She would rather talk to other cats instead of drive them from her territory, as long as they came in peace. On the other hand however Silverfur will obey her leader without question even if she doesn’t agree with what her leader has ordered. First and foremost she is a loyal Clan cat; she just tends to want things to change. She fears that one day her Clan might discover that she has a soft spot for the other Clans and exile her. Silverfur will never kill in battle unless there is no other way and sometimes tends to hold back a little. Even though she is a skilled warrior her wish for peace conflicts with her will to serve the Clan. She also fears that someday this will be the death of her. In addition Silverfur is slow to anger, preferring to allow unkind words and criticism roll off her back. She is a loyal and true friend once she makes friends with another cat. Due to this she is too easily trusting.

History:

Born to Willowfur(mother) and Redstripe(father) Silverkit was the only other kit in the litter of two. Her mother had not eaten well during her pregnancy so both Silverkit and her brother Tigerkit were small and weak when they were first born. They quickly gained their health and strength and soon as they were out of the nursery that could be often found playing with each other and the other kits in the camp. Silverkit, always being the more adventurous one would pretend to be a brave warrior and lead the other kits outside the camp on a “patrol” around the edges of the camp. One time she led all of the kits too far out of camp, only to be discovered by an actual warrior patrol that was returning home. Silverkit was scolded and had to take care of the Elder’s bedding for a whole moon.

Shortly after her punishment was over Silverkit was made an apprentice with her brother and became Silverpaw. Her mentor was a large white tom called Icepelt. She was a quick and eager learner but often found herself annoyed with the slow pace Icepelt planned their lessons. She felt like her apprenticeship dragged on forever, because she would do the same lesson over and over for days straight while her brother would do something different everyday. Silverpaw looked forward to the days when her brother’s mentor Duskfur would take them both out because Icepelt was too busy that day. One night Silverpaw dared her brother that she could beat him in a race to the nearest territory border and back to the den without anyone noticing her. Tigerpaw happily took the challenge and before she knew it they were racing. Silverpaw won the race but her brother didn’t return. The next morning, one of the warrior patrols found his dead body. After examing it the Medicine Cat said Tigerpaw had been killed by a fox. Overwhelmed with guild and grief Silverpaw admitted what had happened to Icepelt and Duskfur. She had to care for the Elders for a week for her recklessness but other than that they felt she had been punished enough.

At twelve moons of age Silverpaw because Silverfur and she became an official warrior of her Clan. She was eager to serve the Clan Silverfur vonlunteered for the dawn and dusk patrol everyday. She preferred to spend her afternoons hunting for the Clan. One day the deputy asked her to come on a patrol where ShadowClan scents had been found in her area. When they got there three ShadowClan cats were hunting on their territory and she got into her first border squabble. During the battle a seasoned ShadowClan warrior managed to leap on her back and raked her shoulders with his claws. After the battle Silverfur went back to camp, proud that she had served her Clan so well. She couldn’t help but feel that Tigerpaw was looking down at her from StarClan and that he was proud of her.

Roleplay Example:

The silver she-cat trudged through the snow, lifting her paws up extremely high close to her body every time she moved one, in a motion that made her look ridiculous. She didn’t care how funny she looked however, but she did hate the freezing cold, wet, slush they called snow. Silverfur opened her mouth to scent the air, trying to locate any kind of prey that would dare venture out in this weather. Very faintly she could smell a squirrel, perhaps emerging from his burrow that kept him warm during leaf-bare. Being light on her paws she crept towards the scent, flicking her tail every so slightly to help keep her balance. She spotted the squirrel emerging and prepared to pounce. As soon as the squirrel was in position she pounced, landing with a barely audibly thud on top of her prey and bit it, breaking its neck. Silverfur purred proudly as she turned back towards the camp, the squirrel dangling from her mouth.

Pictures:

Click to see Silverfur Enjoying a Warm Green-Leaf Day

Codeword:

-Edited By Rain-

[.Rain.]

I edited it to fix the format and get rid of the code word (I dunno why the format keeps messing up.)

And once you get one bio accepted, you don't have to keep adding the codeword. I know that you know it.

Otherwise, it looks fine. Just remember that it's every day, and not everyday. Also, you called her Silverheart at one point in her pwersonality. Otherwise, I see only minor, one-time errors.

EDIT -- Also, you didn't fill out the Do You Honor box. I checked before I edited it the first time to make sure that I didn't erase it.

[Lawly-Pop]

I like her. Can she be Rowankit's mentor once we get a RiverClan leader?

[Shade]

I fixed it, sorry for the mix up, Silverheart was another cat I use to have on another site and I got her confused for a moment when doing Silverfur's profile.

I would be happy for her to be Rowankit's mentor once there is a leader. =)

[.Rain.]

Looking good, Shadeh.

Just remember to avoid using you/your in your bios. A couple of other spelling and grammar errors, but they are minor and can be ignored.

Accepted as warrior of RiverClan

Now Rowankit has somebody to interact with. Ro's going to be thrilled.