Breezepelt|ThunderClan|Warrior|She-Cat

[Breeze~]

Name: Breezepelt
Age: 14 moons
Do you Honor?: StarClan
Mate: Lionstep
Kits: Crowkit (adopted)
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Breed: Mixed
Appearance:

Breezepelt is a light cat, small in stature. Her small frame makes it easy for her to slip into places unnoticed, places where larger cats would immediately draw attention, and she also makes for a very agile hunter. She takes after her mother in this respect, and is built for speed rather than strength. Breezepelt's fur is of a longer variety, a light blonde color that, at first glance, could be mistaken for white. Her dull blue eyes accentuate her pale pelt, adding a shock of color to an otherwise monotone cat. Breezepelt takes after her mother, and as far as she knows, she looks nothing like her father.

One of Breezepelt's unique features is a jagged but thin scar across her right ear, the product of a fight. Breezepelt fusses over it often, as she fusses over every other aspect of her appearance.

All in all, Breezepelt is built more like a WindClan cat, but she's still very much at home in ThunderClan.

Personality:

Breezepelt is a young warrior, and is only as mature as her age - that is to say, not mature at all. She is seen by many around camp as still an apprentice at heart. Breezepelt often does not think before she speaks or acts, many times coming out the worse for it and seeming unintentionally cruel. That being said, the only time a more adult cat comes out of her is when she's around kits. Breezepelt adores the young ones, and is very maternal despite her immaturity. Many of the kits welcome her upbeat optimism, and enjoy her company.

The young warrior cat is also quite vain, and can be seen preening for hours when she is not caught up in the responsibilities of her rank. She's very proud of her appearance, which is another of her greatest flaws - her pride. Breezepelt never takes being told she is wrong well, no matter who corrects her and how kindly.

Despite Breezepelt's many flaws, however, she is still a loving, loyal cat, and likes to think herself a valuable asset to ThunderClan.

History:

Breezekit was born in the throes of greenleaf, of a queen of ThunderClan and a loner who Breezepelt has never had the pleasure of meeting. The young kit's personality began to shine through early, and she always fought with her brother, Blazekit, for the attention of their mother, Spottedshade.

Six moons passed quickly for the both of them, and both were eager apprentices. Just as the two celebrated their seventh moon, however, Blazepaw joined StarClan at the paws of a vicious disease that took his life quickly. Both Breezepaw and Spottedshade mourned for more moons than many thought necessary, and after this incident Breezepaw became slightly shallow, not wanting to be very close to anyone. She still harbors a few inhibitions concerning other cats getting close to her due to this, although she has now accepted that Blazepaw is now with SkyClan. For the most part however, she's back to her normal fun-loving self.

At twelve moons, Breezepaw became Breezepelt, and her warriorhood began. She has been given no apprentices to mentor, and the highlight of her warrior moons thus far has been the violent attack upon herself by a horridly gruesome loner. Breezepelt was very lucky - even though the loner caught her by surprise, she managed to land a good scratch on his left eye. Breezepelt didn't get away with nothing to show for it, however. The cat got in a good slash on her right ear, and she still has the scar to prove it. She never knew why the loner attacked her; Breezepelt chalked it up to deliriousness caused by extreme hunger.

Roleplay Example:

Breezepelt padded lightly through the woods, careful to make as little noise as possible. The Clan was in need of freshkill, and Breezepelt's speed was always a skill to be reckoned with while hunting. The lithe warrior's ears pricked up as a rustle sounded in a nearby mound of crumpled leaves.

Breezepelt rounded slowly towards the direction from which the sound came, and flattened herself to the ground. Belly touching the leaves, Breezepelt wormed her way towards the prey that she sensed, and reared back as she knew she was close enough to pounce.

All the energy that had been stored up in her back limbs was released as her eyes locked onto the small mouse, and Breezepelt leapt forward with purpose. Somehow, however, at the last moment the mouse was alerted to her presence, and scuttled out of the way, leaving Breezepelt crashing to the forest floor with nothing to show for it.

"Drat!" Breezepelt's frustration wasn't anything good to continue hunting with, and she attempted to clear her head before moving on to stalking another small creature.

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Codeword:

The codeword? 'Tis gone! ;D

[.Rain.]

Hide the codeword and give her a breed, please. Then she'll be all set.

Oh! Wait! xD. In appearance, where you say"places that larger cats would immediately draw attention", you should replace the word that with the word where. It makes the sentence less confusing.

[Breeze~]

Oh! Whoops! Thought I gave her a breed! My apologies. And I'll fix the wording with that right away.

[.:Fawn:.]

=) I'm assuming this is all set and ready to be approved?

[.Rain.]

Yep.

Accepted as Warrior of ThunderClan!